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Panga and me took some tourists on a singing tour of the Congo. I steered the boat while Panga strummed on his guitar and watched for crocodiles. At Malebo Pool our tourists reacted with frightened grimaces to me singing.
They asked Panga and I to humor them with a non-musical tour. We obliged them until we came upon some rough rapids. Here, several of the tourists were surprised when they heard my singing a solo. But they were too worried by the approaching cataracts to complain.
Answer:
- Pronoun Case -
Correct writing with pronouns demands careful attention to case. When a pronoun serves as a subject in a clause, it takes the nominative case. Our opening paragraph shows a pronoun in need of a correction:
Panga and me took some tourists on a singing tour of the Congo.
The personal pronoun I has the forms I, me, mine for the nominative, objective, and possessive cases, respectfully. Because the pronoun is part of the subject, the nominative case is called for:
Panga and I took some tourists on a singing tour of the Congo.
Learning these three cases for certain pronouns is our first step. Although it is a bit unorthodox, we recommend the following memory aid:
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nominative
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objective
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possessive
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(subject)
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(object)
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(indicator of ownership)
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I asked
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me for
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my advice.
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You asked
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you for
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your advice.
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He asked
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him for
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his advice.
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She asked
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her for
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her advice.
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It asked
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it for
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its advice.
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We asked
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us for
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our advice.
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They asked
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them for
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their advice.
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Who asked
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whom for
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whose advice?
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