Quiz 1 - Identify problems and suggest corrections:
As Katokwe napped, she ignored the murmuring that was occuring.
Answer:
As Katokwe napped, she ignored the murmuring that was occurring.
[ words ( spelling ) ]
Several islands in Malebo Pool are connected by shallow sand bars.
{ use active voice }
Suggested Answer:
Several islands in Malebo Pool connect by shallow sand bars.
or: Shallow sand bars connect several islands in Malebo Pool.
[ clarity ( active voice ) ]
Dear Sir Stanley;
Yesterday at 2-30 P.M. we crossed the river and entered the country you founded in 1879 for Belgium, The Congo Free State.
Answer:
Dear Sir Stanley:
Yesterday at 2:30 P.M. we crossed the river and entered the country you founded in 1879 for Belgium: The Congo Free State.
[ punctuation ]
Panga and her went ashore to pick flowers.
Answer:
Panga and she went ashore to pick flowers.
[ grammar ]
It was not Panga but instead Katokwe who raced down the Lukuga.
Answer:
It was not Panga but Katokwe who raced down the Lukuga.
[ style ( idiom ) ]
The level in Malebo Pool is increased four meters in a rainy season.
{ use active voice }
Answer:
The level in Malebo Pool increases four meters in a rainy season.
[ clarity ]
We first had to do three things, buy food, rent a boat, and slather ourselves with insect repellent.
Answer:
We first had to do three things: buy food, rent a boat, and slather ourselves with insect repellent.
[ punctuation ]
The park ranger proscribed getting too close to the waterfall.
Answer:
The park ranger proscribed getting too close to the waterfall.
[ words - correct as is ]
A gaggle of us brethren did the town Kalemie, where the lake meets the river.
Suggested Answer:
We visited the town Kalemie, where the lake meets the river.
[ style ]
The tourists and I pushed Panga and he into the water.
Answer:
The tourists and I pushed Panga and him into the water.
[ grammar ]