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Grammar Mississippi

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Strictly speaking, a delta is more bayou than basin.
Answer: 
Strictly speaking, a delta is more bayou than basin.
[ okay as is ]

Silt that arrives slowly builds up a delta.
Answer: 
Silt that arrives builds up a delta slowly.

The Mississippi delta has, due to a host of weather and geological factors, moved almost once every 1000 years.
Answer: 
Due to a host of weather and geological factors, the Mississippi delta has moved almost once every 1000 years.

Raised on the delta, slow-moving marsh waters are quite normal.
Answer: 
Raised on the delta, I consider slow-moving marsh waters to be quite normal.

While rowing through the delta marshes, frogs and crickets serenaded me.
Answer: 
While I was rowing through the delta marshes, frogs and crickets serenaded me.

The silt nearly builds a new delta every 1000 years.
Answer: 
The silt builds a new delta nearly every 1000 years.

Swirling in the salty water, we saw silt enter the marsh.
Answer: 
Swirling in the salty water, silt entered the marsh as we watched.

Seeing the new delta form, the spectacle was awe-inspiring.
Answer: 
Seeing the new delta form, we were awed by the spectacle.

We almost saw the entire delta.
Answer: 
We saw almost the entire delta.

The delta may move to the Atchafalaya from its present location which would be the natural result.
Answer: 
From its present location, the delta may move to the Atchafalaya, which would be the natural result.

 

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