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Strictly speaking, a delta is more bayou than basin.
Answer:
Strictly speaking, a delta is more bayou than basin.
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Silt that arrives slowly builds up a delta.
Answer:
Silt that arrives builds up a delta slowly.
The Mississippi delta has, due to a host of weather and geological factors, moved almost once every 1000 years.
Answer:
Due to a host of weather and geological factors, the Mississippi delta has moved almost once every 1000 years.
Raised on the delta, slow-moving marsh waters are quite normal.
Answer:
Raised on the delta, I consider slow-moving marsh waters to be quite normal.
While rowing through the delta marshes, frogs and crickets serenaded me.
Answer:
While I was rowing through the delta marshes, frogs and crickets serenaded me.
The silt nearly builds a new delta every 1000 years.
Answer:
The silt builds a new delta nearly every 1000 years.
Swirling in the salty water, we saw silt enter the marsh.
Answer:
Swirling in the salty water, silt entered the marsh as we watched.
Seeing the new delta form, the spectacle was awe-inspiring.
Answer:
Seeing the new delta form, we were awed by the spectacle.
We almost saw the entire delta.
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We saw almost the entire delta.
The delta may move to the Atchafalaya from its present location which would be the natural result.
Answer:
From its present location, the delta may move to the Atchafalaya, which would be the natural result.