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Quiz Mississippi

Quiz 1 - Identify problems and suggest corrections:

Cecils and Nathans geography class was interrupted by the debate at two of the clock.
Answer: 
Cecil and Nathan's geography class was interrupted by the debate at two o'clock.
[ punctuation ]

Ms. Manthey's students discussed the meandering Mississippi between themselves for awhile.
Answer: 
Ms. Manthey's students discussed the meandering Mississippi among themselves for a while.
[ words ]

Deltas that fill up randomly move to new locations.
Answer: 
Deltas that fill up move randomly to new locations.
[ grammar ]

Cecils' sister-in-laws both wish they're homes hadnt been damaged in the floods of 93.
Answer: 
Cecil's sister-in-laws both wish their homes hadn't been damaged in the floods of '93.
[ punctuation ]

During the period from June to August, Evelyn supplied periodic messages to friends back home.
Suggested Answer: 
From June to August, Evelyn sent periodic messages to friends back home.
[ clarity ]

On one island stood a soccer-stadium-sized grove of trees.
Suggested Answer: 
On one island stood a grove of trees the size of a soccer stadium.
[ style ]

After depositing enough silt, the delta may move with the river.
Answer: 
After depositing enough silt, the river may move and the delta may move with it.
[ grammar ]

When we were stuck a little earlier, Captain McGrew was rather upset that we were pretty careless and not very heedful of sandbars.
Suggested Answer: 
When we were stuck earlier, Captain McGrew was upset that we were careless and not heedful of sandbars.
[ style ]

Bob practiced paddling for hours so that in the future he would achieve his best.
Suggested Answer: 
Bob practiced paddling for hours so that he would do his best.
[ clarity ]

Less than three students got the Mississippi quiz questions alright.
Answer: 
Fewer than three students got the Mississippi quiz questions all right.
[ words ]

 

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