Quiz 1 - Identify problems and suggest corrections:
Cecils and Nathans geography class was interrupted by the debate at two of the clock.
Answer:
Cecil and Nathan's geography class was interrupted by the debate at two o'clock.
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Ms. Manthey's students discussed the meandering Mississippi between themselves for awhile.
Answer:
Ms. Manthey's students discussed the meandering Mississippi among themselves for a while.
[ words ]
Deltas that fill up randomly move to new locations.
Answer:
Deltas that fill up move randomly to new locations.
[ grammar ]
Cecils' sister-in-laws both wish they're homes hadnt been damaged in the floods of 93.
Answer:
Cecil's sister-in-laws both wish their homes hadn't been damaged in the floods of '93.
[ punctuation ]
During the period from June to August, Evelyn supplied periodic messages to friends back home.
Suggested Answer:
From June to August, Evelyn sent periodic messages to friends back home.
[ clarity ]
On one island stood a soccer-stadium-sized grove of trees.
Suggested Answer:
On one island stood a grove of trees the size of a soccer stadium.
[ style ]
After depositing enough silt, the delta may move with the river.
Answer:
After depositing enough silt, the river may move and the delta may move with it.
[ grammar ]
When we were stuck a little earlier, Captain McGrew was rather upset that we were pretty careless and not very heedful of sandbars.
Suggested Answer:
When we were stuck earlier, Captain McGrew was upset that we were careless and not heedful of sandbars.
[ style ]
Bob practiced paddling for hours so that in the future he would achieve his best.
Suggested Answer:
Bob practiced paddling for hours so that he would do his best.
[ clarity ]
Less than three students got the Mississippi quiz questions alright.
Answer:
Fewer than three students got the Mississippi quiz questions all right.
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