Quiz 3 - Identify problems and suggest corrections:
We intend on doing our towboat duties with care.
Answer:
We intend to do our towboat duties with care.
[ style ( idiom ) ]
The amount of riverside towns stranded by the meandering river is at least three.
Answer:
The number of riverside towns stranded by the meandering river is at least three.
[ words ]
The Mississippi terminates 90 miles south of New Orleans.
Suggested Answer:
The Mississippi ends 90 miles south of New Orleans.
[ clarity ]
Because of their closeness at Baton Rouge, experts believe the Mississippi may try to merge into the Atchafalaya.
Answer:
Because the rivers are close at Baton Rouge, experts believe the Mississippi may try to merge into the Atchafalaya.
[ grammar ]
Captain McGrew pointed out a building modeled after an early plantation mansion.
Answer:
Captain McGrew pointed out a building modeled on early plantation mansion.
[ style (idiom) ]
Some of Albertas and Saskatchewans rain is collected in the Milk River, who's water joins the Missouri River in Montana.
Answer:
Some of Alberta's and Saskatchewan's rain is collected in the Milk River, whose water joins the Missouri River in Montana.
[ punctuation ]
Bob Louque illustrated in advance how he would steer the canoe away from alligators.
Suggested Answer:
Bob Louque showed how he would steer the canoe away from alligators.
[ clarity ]
Curious about the Mississippi delta, a visit showed it to be a soggy place.
Answer:
Curious about the Mississippi delta, we visited and found it to be a soggy place.
[ grammar ]
Lake Itasca, source of the Mississippi, is just one of Minnesotas 10,000 lakes.
Answer:
Lake Itasca, source of the Mississippi, is just one of Minnesota's 10,000 lakes.
[ punctuation ]
Quanah walks to school daily, carrying his map of the Mississippi.
Suggested Answer:
Quanah walks to school daily, carrying his map of the Mississippi.
[ correct as is - words ( spelling ) ]