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Quiz Mississippi

Quiz 3 - Identify problems and suggest corrections:

We intend on doing our towboat duties with care.
Answer: 
We intend to do our towboat duties with care.
[ style ( idiom ) ]

The amount of riverside towns stranded by the meandering river is at least three.
Answer: 
The number of riverside towns stranded by the meandering river is at least three.
[ words ]

The Mississippi terminates 90 miles south of New Orleans.
Suggested Answer: 
The Mississippi ends 90 miles south of New Orleans.
[ clarity ]

Because of their closeness at Baton Rouge, experts believe the Mississippi may try to merge into the Atchafalaya.
Answer: 
Because the rivers are close at Baton Rouge, experts believe the Mississippi may try to merge into the Atchafalaya.
[ grammar ]

Captain McGrew pointed out a building modeled after an early plantation mansion.
Answer: 
Captain McGrew pointed out a building modeled on early plantation mansion.
[ style (idiom) ]

Some of Albertas and Saskatchewans rain is collected in the Milk River, who's water joins the Missouri River in Montana.
Answer: 
Some of Alberta's and Saskatchewan's rain is collected in the Milk River, whose water joins the Missouri River in Montana.
[ punctuation ]

Bob Louque illustrated in advance how he would steer the canoe away from alligators.
Suggested Answer: 
Bob Louque showed how he would steer the canoe away from alligators.
[ clarity ]

Curious about the Mississippi delta, a visit showed it to be a soggy place.
Answer: 
Curious about the Mississippi delta, we visited and found it to be a soggy place.
[ grammar ]

Lake Itasca, source of the Mississippi, is just one of Minnesotas 10,000 lakes.
Answer: 
Lake Itasca, source of the Mississippi, is just one of Minnesota's 10,000 lakes.
[ punctuation ]

Quanah walks to school daily, carrying his map of the Mississippi.
Suggested Answer: 
Quanah walks to school daily, carrying his map of the Mississippi.
[ correct as is - words ( spelling ) ]

 

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