Quiz 3 - Identify problems and suggest corrections:
It is natural to associate the Congo river and the Kongo tribe.
Answer:
It is natural to associate the Congo river with the Kongo tribe.
[ style (idiom) ]
The careful pharmacist will peruse the prescription before filling it.
Answer:
The careful pharmacist will peruse the prescription before filling it.
[ words - correct as is ]
Black tributaries are combined with red streams to form the brown Congo. { use active voice }
Answer:
Black tributaries combine with red streams to form the brown Congo.
[ clarity ( active voice ) ]
You and them ought to go swimming.
Answer:
You and they ought to go swimming.
[ grammar ]
Katokwe wanted to ensure herself for long-term disability.
Answer:
Katokwe wanted to insure herself for long-term disability.
[ words ]
After a week on the river they were ready for: warm showers, dry beds, and a roof over their heads.
Answer:
After a week on the river they were ready for warm showers, dry beds, and a roof over their heads.
[ punctuation ]
The rapids of the Congo, which are really no big deal, represent the largest reserve of water power in the world.
Suggested Answer:
The rapids of the Congo represent the largest reserve of water power in the world.
[ style ]
We caught five fish, but only kept two for food purposes.
Answer:
We caught five fish, but only kept two for food.
[ clarity ]
Panga heard my whistling at the birds.
Answer:
Panga heard me whistling at the birds.
[ grammar ]
Babatunde made many new friends on the Congo, that is: he sang to the animals.
Answer:
Babatunde made many new friends on the Congo: that is, he sang to the animals.
[ punctuation ]