Quiz 4 - Identify problems and suggest corrections:
Mayor Oshodi insured the voters that there was no reason for alarm.
Answer:
Mayor Oshodi assured the voters that there was no reason for alarm.
[ words ]
I seem to be the only one capable of noticing that the Congo alternates between wide, placid areas and narrow, violent passages.
Suggested Answer:
The Congo alternates between wide, placid areas and narrow, violent passages.
[ style ]
He titled his journal, Ajaja Olatunji, Boy on a Daring River Quest.
Answer:
He titled his journal, Ajaja Olatunji: Boy on a Daring River Quest.
[ punctuation ]
"I can whistle as well as him," said one young tourist.
Answer:
"I can whistle as well as he can," said one young tourist.
[ grammar ]
Features of the Congo are described in the new pamphlet.
{ use active voice }
Suggested Answer:
The new pamphlet describes features of the Congo.
[clarity ( active voice ) ]
Let me tell ya, the forty-meter waterfall at Inga was impressive, even to this world-traveling writer.
Suggested Answer:
The forty-meter waterfall at Inga was impressive.
[ style ]
To fasinate Katokwe, one must do something definitly noticable.
Answer:
To fascinate Katokwe, one must do something definitely noticeable.
[ words ( spelling ) ]
It's no secret that Panga knows the river better than me.
Answer:
It's no secret that Panga knows the river better than I do.
[ grammar ]
Watching the sunset on the Congo, Ajaja quoted from Genesis 1-18, "And he saw that it was good."
Answer:
Watching the sunset on the Congo, Ajaja quoted from Genesis 1:18: "And he saw that it was good."
[ punctuation ]
In a narrow mountain pass the river current is increased.
{ use active voice }
Answer:
In a narrow mountain pass the river current increases.
[ clarity ( active voice ) ]