Quiz 1 - Identify problems and suggest corrections:
Mrs Lobo wonders where her husband learned so much mythology?
Answer:
Mrs. Lobo wonders where her husband learned so much mythology.
[ punctuation ]
The tidal surge slammed against the ghats, irregardless of the damage it inflicted.
Answer:
The tidal surge slammed against the ghats, regardless of the damage it inflicted.
[ words ]
"Why did King Bhagirathi do penance for King Sagara?," Ganga asked.
Answer:
"Why did King Bhagirathi do penance for King Sagara?" Ganga asked.
[ punctuation ]
Naresh watched a distant colony of terns take flight in a large flowing group.
{ substitute a simile }
Answer:
Naresh watched a distant colony of terns take flight like a swarm of insects.
[ style ( simile ) ]
The workers at the Manikarnika burning ghats are busier than any other crematorium in Varanasi.
Answer:
The workers at the Manikarnika burning ghats are busier than the workers at any other crematorium in Varanasi.
[ grammar ]
The confluence of the two separate rivers located at Allahabad is actually known as the Prayag.
Answer:
The confluence of the two rivers at Allahabad is known as the Prayag.
[ clarity ]
Flocks of parakeets often get off on the wrong foot with farmers by leaving few crops behind in their wake.
Answer:
Flocks of parakeets often anger farmers by destroying crops.
[ style ( mixed metaphors ) ]
I remember the burning ghats better than you.
Answer:
I remember the burning ghats better than you do.
[ grammar ]
The existing Yamuna River is a river that joins the Ganges at Allahabad.
Answer:
The Yamuna River joins the Ganges at Allahabad.
[ clarity ]
Imediately before coming home, Malati did some isometric excersize ageinst the ghats.
Answer:
Immediately before coming home, Malati did some isometric exercise against the ghats.
[ words ( spelling ) ]