Quiz 2 - Identify problems and suggest corrections:
Kamala was disappointed at Naresh because his conclusions were based around only a few facts about the hoopoe.
Answer:
Kamala was disappointed with Naresh because his conclusions were based on only a few facts about the hoopoe.
[ style ( idiom ) ]
Hopefully, Malati did not misstate her opinion that the tidal waves were making her nauseous.
Answer:
It is hoped that Malati did not misstate her opinion that the tidal waves were making her nauseated.
[ words ]
Ashes from the burning ghats are deposited in the Ganges as it flowed by.
Answer:
Ashes from the burning ghats are deposited in the Ganges as it flows by.
[ grammar ]
The feathers of the hoopoe are pretty and as smooth as a baby's bottom, but they stink like a skunk.
Answer:
The feathers of the hoopoe are pretty and smooth, but they have a terrible odor.
[ style ( mixed metaphors ) ]
At 9 AM Girish will receive his degree, ie, his Ph.D..
Answer:
At 9 A.M. Girish will receive his degree, i.e., his Ph.D.
[ punctuation ]
We passed by the ghats as described by our tourbook.
Answer:
We passed the ghats described by our tourbook.
[ clarity ]
Carry the body down to the Ganges, and then you should locate the burning ghats .
Answer:
Carry the body down to the Ganges, and then locate the burning ghats .
[ grammar ]
It was truly noble of Arjun to finally take possession of the wrecked boat.
Answer:
It was truly noble of Arjun to finally take possession of the wrecked boat.
[ correct as is - words ( spelling ) ]
The elephant knows a way that can be taken to the ghats .
Answer:
The elephant knows a way to the ghats .
[ clarity ]
Was Lord Siva fond of Ganga.
Answer:
Was Lord Siva fond of Ganga?
[ punctuation ]