Quiz 3 - Identify problems and suggest corrections:
We noticed the presence of the burning ghats, where various corpses were being cremated.
Answer:
We noticed the burning ghats, where corpses were being cremated.
[ clarity ]
"Help them," screamed King Sagara.
Answer:
"Help them!" screamed King Sagara.
[ punctuation ]
After the worker stacked the sandalwood in a criss-cross pattern, it was paid for by us.
Answer:
After the worker stacked the sandalwood in a criss-cross pattern, we paid for it.
[ grammar ]
The resting stork stood perfectly still on its long thin legs.
{ replace with a metaphor }
Suggested Answer:
The resting stork was a statue on stilts.
( or maybe: ...was a feather pillow on a pole.)
[ style ( metaphor ) ]
The fires on the burning ghats were fueled with the aid of sandalwood for the rich and by means of neem wood for the poor.
Answer:
The fires on the burning ghats were fueled with sandalwood for the rich and by neem wood for the poor.
[ clarity ]
Ganga came down from heaven! She followed the king east! They purified the ashes at the Bay of Bengal!
Answer:
Ganga came down from heaven and followed the king east. They purified the ashes at the Bay of Bengal.
[ punctuation ]
More than any river, the Ganges is considered a source of salvation.
Answer:
More than any other river, the Ganges is considered a source of salvation.
[ grammar ]
The uninterested peace officer listened carefully to separate accounts of how the boat ran aground.
Answer:
The disinterested peace officer listened carefully to separate accounts of how the boat ran aground.
[ words ]
Kamala naively expected the birds were quiet.
Answer:
Kamala naively expected the birds would be quiet.
[ style ( idiom ) ]
Irregardless of the consequences, Arjun sailed north at high tide.
Answer:
Regardless of the consequences, Arjun sailed north at high tide.
[ words ]