Quiz 1 - Identify problems and suggest corrections:
Captain Zhang has his own particular way of asking for the appropriate fee.
Answer:
Captain Zhang has his own way of asking for the fee.
[ clarity ]
The boat moved slowly upriver; which was only possible because the prevailing winds blew that way.
Answer:
The boat moved slowly upriver, which was only possible because the prevailing winds blew that way.
[ punctuation ]
Fishing infers a life on the water.
Answer:
Fishing implies a life on the water.
[ words ]
Liyao told Lu that she ought to visit Lake Poyanghu in Jiangxi Province.
Answer:
Liyao told Lu that Liyao ought to visit Lake Poyanghu in Jiangxi Province.
[ grammar ]
Junks and sampans have changed little over the years, Sung Dynasty paintings of 1000 years ago show similar vessels.
Answer:
Junks and sampans have changed little over the years; Sung Dynasty paintings of 1000 years ago show similar vessels.
[ punctuation ]
Baosheng bumped into a tracker married to his ex-wife shortly after dusk on a sharp turn along the hazardous Emperor Path.
Suggested Answer:
Shortly after dusk on a sharp turn along the hazardous Emperor Path, Baosheng bumped into a tracker married to his ex-wife.
[ style ]
Each of the fishermen has one net to haul in their catch.
Answer:
Each of the fishermen has one net to haul in his catch.
[ grammar ]
Our tourguide Bao told stories that contained descriptions of ancient Chinese customs.
{ make the verb more vigorous }
Suggested Answer:
Our tourguide Bao told stories that described ancient Chinese customs.
[ clarity ]
Several trackers compared the Emperor Path to a much easier path.
Answer:
Several trackers compared the Emperor Path with a much easier path.
[ style ( idiom ) ]
We traveled further down the Yangtze than the previous tour group traveled.
Answer:
We traveled farther down the Yangtze than the previous tour group traveled.
[ words ]