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Quiz Yangtze

Quiz 1 - Identify problems and suggest corrections:

The associated tourbook shows how to properly estimate the height of the gorge.
Answer: 
The tourbook shows how to estimate the height of the gorge.
[ clarity ]

The PRC consists of provinces, each composing land and people.
Answer: 
The PRC consists of provinces, each comprising land and people.
[ words ]

In Hukou they always tell you about the dangers of high waters in Lake Poyanghu.
Answer: 
In Hukou the dangers of high waters in Lake Poyanghu are well known.
[ grammar ]

A smooth docking in Wuhan will be a demonstration of his skills as a river boat pilot.
{ make the verb more vigorous }
Suggested Answer: 
A smooth docking in Wuhan will demonstrate his skills as a river boat pilot.
[ clarity ]

Baosheng was worried over the possibility that he might die from an infection.
Answer: 
Baosheng was worried about the possibility that he might die of an infection.
[ style ( idiom ) ]

The Yangtze was once a clean river today it is terribly polluted near industrial cities.
Answer: 
The Yangtze was once a clean river; today it is terribly polluted near industrial cities.
[ punctuation ]

Lu laughed at the farmer which had planted rice just before the summer floods.
Answer: 
Lu laughed at the farmer who had planted rice just before the summer floods.
[ grammar ]

Baosheng dreamed. He was sitting at the pagoda. It was high on the bluff. He felt the feng-shui. There was harmony in the wind and water. It was peaceful. He sensed a balance between the yin and the yang.
{ change from choppy to flowing }
Suggested Answer: 
Baosheng dreamed as he sat at the pagoda high on the bluff. He felt harmony in the feng-shui, the wind and water. He sensed a peaceful balance between the yin and the yang.
[ style ]

Liyao's continueous statments about the levees were the most forcful imagineable.
Answer: 
Liyao's continuous statements about the levees were the most forceful imaginable.
[ words ( spelling ) ]

The Yangtze has at least three names; The Great River (Ta Jiang), The Long River (Chang Jiang), and The River of Gold Sand (Chin-sha Jiang).
Answer: 
The Yangtze has at least three names: The Great River (Ta Jiang), The Long River (Chang Jiang), and The River of Gold Sand (Chin-sha Jiang).
[ punctuation ]

 

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