Quiz 1 - Identify problems and suggest corrections:
The associated tourbook shows how to properly estimate the height of the gorge.
Answer:
The tourbook shows how to estimate the height of the gorge.
[ clarity ]
The PRC consists of provinces, each composing land and people.
Answer:
The PRC consists of provinces, each comprising land and people.
[ words ]
In Hukou they always tell you about the dangers of high waters in Lake Poyanghu.
Answer:
In Hukou the dangers of high waters in Lake Poyanghu are well known.
[ grammar ]
A smooth docking in Wuhan will be a demonstration of his skills as a river boat pilot.
{ make the verb more vigorous }
Suggested Answer:
A smooth docking in Wuhan will demonstrate his skills as a river boat pilot.
[ clarity ]
Baosheng was worried over the possibility that he might die from an infection.
Answer:
Baosheng was worried about the possibility that he might die of an infection.
[ style ( idiom ) ]
The Yangtze was once a clean river today it is terribly polluted near industrial cities.
Answer:
The Yangtze was once a clean river; today it is terribly polluted near industrial cities.
[ punctuation ]
Lu laughed at the farmer which had planted rice just before the summer floods.
Answer:
Lu laughed at the farmer who had planted rice just before the summer floods.
[ grammar ]
Baosheng dreamed. He was sitting at the pagoda. It was high on the bluff. He felt the feng-shui. There was harmony in the wind and water. It was peaceful. He sensed a balance between the yin and the yang.
{ change from choppy to flowing }
Suggested Answer:
Baosheng dreamed as he sat at the pagoda high on the bluff. He felt harmony in the feng-shui, the wind and water. He sensed a peaceful balance between the yin and the yang.
[ style ]
Liyao's continueous statments about the levees were the most forcful imagineable.
Answer:
Liyao's continuous statements about the levees were the most forceful imaginable.
[ words ( spelling ) ]
The Yangtze has at least three names; The Great River (Ta Jiang), The Long River (Chang Jiang), and The River of Gold Sand (Chin-sha Jiang).
Answer:
The Yangtze has at least three names: The Great River (Ta Jiang), The Long River (Chang Jiang), and The River of Gold Sand (Chin-sha Jiang).
[ punctuation ]